"The book is about the failure of our entire system: who gets to thrive and who scrambles to survive."
Interesting, but:-
“...The failure of our entire system...”
No. Faults yes. Failure no. And certainly not our “entire” system. Such hyperbole is more likely to alienate readers than convince them.
Interesting, but:-
“...The failure of our entire system...”
No. Faults yes. Failure no. And certainly not our “entire” system. Such hyperbole is more likely to alienate readers than convince them.